Saturday, 28 July 2012

Heart knows no reason (story in 55 words)

The moon looked pensive tonight. 
She once again looked longingly at the unfaithful sun. 
Why did he maintain this distance ? She wanted to look into his eyes and  melt away in his arms. 
Lonely... forlorn... filled with revenge she decided to come in between them ... 

The little girl on earth exclaimed with glee " The eclipse !" 



Submitted at Sunday Scribblings for the prompt -  Distance

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32 comments:

  1. oldegg28 July 2012 at 21:20

    I had always thought of the moon as unfaithful, never being a constant in our skies. Now she is jealous the cold hearted hussy!

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  2. umashankar28 July 2012 at 21:37

    Drama, suspense, and twist? Sure!

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  3. Ranjana's craft blog28 July 2012 at 23:58

    Very nice...nice explanation to eclipse :-)

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  4. Ash29 July 2012 at 00:06

    lovely :)

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  5. saikat mbka ghosh29 July 2012 at 03:37

    a Tangy TWist F55 , lovely :)

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  6. Green Speck29 July 2012 at 03:43

    Wow ... too good ... great imagination :-)

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  7. Vållῐ ★☆29 July 2012 at 04:23

    Lovely!...Great imagination!

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  8. keiths ramblings29 July 2012 at 04:55

    Excellent!Love it.

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  9. Linda Jacobs29 July 2012 at 04:56

    Cool personification!

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  10. jaish_vats29 July 2012 at 08:08

    Very well written TTT!

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  11. joanne29 July 2012 at 15:03

    almost mystical....delightful and surreal...

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  12. Granny Smith29 July 2012 at 16:57

    The stuff of myth! Delightful!

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  13. Josie Two Shoes29 July 2012 at 18:10

    And now we know the story... and it made me smile! Wonderfully thought out and executed!

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  14. Meoww29 July 2012 at 20:14

    Sweet :) Love your really short stories :)

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  15. Engram29 July 2012 at 20:44

    Great 55 post TTT !!!

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  16. AmitAag30 July 2012 at 03:36

    ...awesome Tangy! Loved it:)

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  17. Panchali30 July 2012 at 05:48

    Immaculate 55, TTT...!!!The last line takes the cake...lubly :))

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  18. indu chhibber30 July 2012 at 08:55

    Great concept TTT !!!

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  19. magiceye30 July 2012 at 09:12

    :) cute!

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  20. debajyoti30 July 2012 at 09:53

    ok, so that's how eclipse takes place! nicely written.

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  21. Ranita Sinha30 July 2012 at 13:16

    Great TTT!!!loved it..

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  22. D.Nambiar30 July 2012 at 16:36

    Aww...that's a damn cute story. :)

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  23. Ghazala Hossain30 July 2012 at 23:12

    What a definition of an eclipse, super :)

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  24. Simran31 July 2012 at 09:09

    Lovely take with the concept of Eclipse :)

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  25. Marita Abraham31 July 2012 at 10:16

    Haha. How interesting, I'd never have thought of an eclipse that way!

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  26. Megha Sarin31 July 2012 at 12:08

    WOW! Love the lines..beautiful :)

    love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  27. gunjan kumar1 August 2012 at 21:27

    nice twist,like the way you scribble...
    :)
    -Gunjan Sinha

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  28. Bharathi2 August 2012 at 02:48

    Good one :)

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  29. TTT2 August 2012 at 10:28

    Thank you all !!!! thanks for all the encouragement which keeps me going !

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  30. Aditi Mitra2 August 2012 at 22:28

    awesome!!

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  31. Mak7 August 2012 at 00:28

    Lovely TTT :) Loved it

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