"We will be together ...Always" He whispered into her ears as they built sand castle 70 years ago...
Today as they floated hand in hand over the clouds , he mocked " You are late ! "
"Sorry love , our little granddaughter held my hands tightly in the hospital. But see I kept my promise... To be with you always..."
***A story in 55 words...My first attempt ***
Submitted at Sunday Scribblings for the prompt - Always
A moving tale...very good for a first. :)
ReplyDeleteVery touching and very sweet :)
ReplyDeletenow that's special. i read a lot of 55 fictions and hardly liked one. this one stands out :)
ReplyDeletephatichar : Thanks !!!
ReplyDeleteCD!!! : really happy that u liked it !
debajyothi : thank you ...though I was a bit apprehensive about limiting my thoughts to just 55 words :)
very beautiful.. i loved it..
ReplyDeleteSuperb....Best among all i have read till now.....Too good..:)
ReplyDeletegreat ! i loved it......
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