Saturday 12 May 2012

Revenge...


As she entered into her house she heard a moan. Fearing the worst she rushed into the bedroom. The sight that met her eyes filled her with sick despair. He was laying on the floor ...too week to even cry out loud.
Tears filled her eyes. How could they do this ? And why ?

She had realized those people could go to any extend to take a revenge.

She knelt besides him. With tears in her eyes she whispered " How ...how did this happen ? "
She couldn't make out at first what he was saying. Then she caught the words "sweets ...in the kitchen" .
"They must have poisoned it " she shrieked !
"Run ...run before they catch you as well"

I will get you some water. She ran towards the kitchen. There was no water in the kitchen. Everything was dry. Even the tap which used to keep dripping was dry now. With a wail she ran towards the bathroom. Dry ! Not a drop of water. Then she saw the bucket of water outside the bathroom. Before she would do anything she heard a gasp from the bedroom. She just stood there like a statue. Not knowing what to do ....she felt lost and clueless.

She had met him only a few months back. She was impressed by his looks. She willfully succumbed to his charms. She said yes over the imported cheese and wine he offered her at his beautiful house.

Now what ? She would have to leave this house immediately. The beautiful house where they planned to have their baby.

NO ! She wouldn't just leave like that and run away.

She immediately set about gnawing the cables of the Telephone and the Home Theater system. As she walked out of the door she looked back and saw the rat trap. Though her eyes were filled with tears she gave a smile . 
Revenge was sweet. 


5 comments:

  1. amazingly well thought twist :)
    i guess the first rat love story..lol
    good one..

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  2. Thanks ! and ofcourse Everyone has a love story ...

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  3. Ha ha..nice (you need some tinkering with the grammar, but hey...the tanginess was unmistakable) :)

    Pssst - it's 'lying' on the floor, not 'laying' :P. Keep in mind these small things, they matter in the long run. Sorry, couldn't resist - the editor in me (my job in the real world) keeps popping his head out. Don't mind.. :P

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  4. @ phatichar : 'The' Phatichar read my blog !!! I am sooooo ...happy . You don't realize is but you just made my day ! And yeah the grammar and the spellings **blush blush** ...will give extra attention to that side !
    But thanks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. haha....nice story with both love at first sight and revenge too...nice rat story after mickey and mini's :-)

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