Wednesday, 4 July 2012

I can find my way ...


He just turned and walked away
I was left behind 
I had my dreams and hopes with me 
But he was all alone 

My tears happily mingled
with the dewdrops
Butterflies gliding in the wind 
gave me wings of hope

I’m setting you free
Go, find your own dreams
Run, run away towards the horizon
I release you from my love ...my love 



Like a butterfly I want to live in the moment and not in days or years ...



Take Care,
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42 comments:

  1. debajyoti4 July 2012 at 15:26

    beautifully written TTT!!!

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  2. Meoww4 July 2012 at 19:51

    Oh! So touching... I agree. Tangy Tomato, it is by letting your love lose, do you know really if it was true! Good one!

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  3. Rajesh4 July 2012 at 20:32

    Beautiful.

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  4. Shah Nawaz4 July 2012 at 20:49

    Waaa.... beautifull....

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  5. Rachna4 July 2012 at 20:51

    Touching!

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  6. Irfanuddin4 July 2012 at 21:21

    beautifully penned....:)

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  7. Ash4 July 2012 at 21:47

    so lovely :)

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  8. jaish_vats4 July 2012 at 22:20

    That was so sensible and touching :)

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  9. panchalibolchi4 July 2012 at 23:19

    Aaah...TTT,

    Love the images of your artistic writing playing out like a scene from a movie ! Beautiful..

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    1. TTT5 July 2012 at 05:53

      Thank you ...am so happy that u liked it !

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  10. Ranjana's craft blog4 July 2012 at 23:31

    Fantastic ...Even I want live in the moment..and enjoy every moment

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  11. AmitAag5 July 2012 at 01:46

    Oh so touching and delicate, Tangy:)

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  12. vinisha v shah5 July 2012 at 02:45

    Beautiful and awesome :)

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  13. Vaishali Shelatkar5 July 2012 at 05:47

    Good one....I must say "Tangy Twist" :-)

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  14. Sohini5 July 2012 at 06:27

    it's too beautiful :-)

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  15. magiceye5 July 2012 at 07:19

    Love, ideally!
    Beautifully versed!

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  16. Abhinav5 July 2012 at 09:23

    Beautiful!! I very much liked that caption given under the picture - 'live in the moment and not in days or years...'

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  17. Neha5 July 2012 at 11:00

    lovely :)

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  18. D.Nambiar5 July 2012 at 18:41

    Love the imagery in the poem and the lovely image that goes with it.

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  19. Saru Singhal5 July 2012 at 21:14

    Lovely poem and second paragraph onwards it's brilliant!

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  20. saikat mbka ghosh6 July 2012 at 06:54

    lovely inspiring lines :)

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  21. Priyaa6 July 2012 at 06:57

    Beautiful is the word :-)

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  22. indu chhibber6 July 2012 at 07:20

    Very fine sentiments expressed lyrically-i loved it .

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  23. Mak6 July 2012 at 08:45

    Beautifully written TTT...
    "I had my dreams and hopes with me
    But he was all alone " positive words.

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  24. alka narula6 July 2012 at 10:28

    if you love some one set him free if he's yours he's sure to come back to u :)

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  25. Vållῐ ★☆7 July 2012 at 02:26

    I guess there is hidden silent pain behind "I’m setting you free
    Go, find your own dreams"...Beautiful touching poem...

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  26. sathish kumar7 July 2012 at 08:56

    it's said "if you love somebody you should prepare to set them free" and you beautifully echoed...

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  27. Swarnali11 July 2012 at 08:47

    Hey TTT!!
    Thanks for leaving your lovely comment on my blog :)
    I love your pen name :D Coming to the poem, i love the imagery you have used, brilliantly written.
    P.S.- Am your 29th follower :)

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  28. The Fool12 July 2012 at 00:26

    Simple and nice. The end was nicely done the my love used in different forms. A truly poetic touch.

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  29. Vaishali Shelatkar14 February 2014 at 00:02

    I luved the spirit of your writing.....good one.

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