You see me cleaning the scribbles on the wall
You bow and make me feel like a queen
'I am proud of you darling
You keep my house oh so clean'
I get back my lost confidence
As I look lovingly at the sparkling wall
I feel a rush of adrenaline
For it shines like a trophy above all
With a new vigor in my step
I shake up all the cushions on the sofa
As the dust fly out like demon
I feel a sense of freedom
I am surprised at my strength
I reach out for the broom
As I remove all the cobwebs
standing tall over the chair in the room
That night as I go to sleep
All my worries dumped in trash
I can't help but pat my back
I am ready now to start my life afresh
I say good bye to you
My life with you cleaned , vacuumed, washed and dried
With dignity confidence and new strength
I am ready to take on the new life with pride
Take Care,
This was so sweet TTT...something very different!
ReplyDeletethank you :) just struck me while I was cleaning the house and thinking when will i finish this boring thing ;)
Deleteintelligently written. :)
ReplyDeletethanks Gunjan ...
DeleteDiwali cleaning?!! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteha ha ha .... I just started my Diwali cleaning when I felt like writing thi ...guess now cleaning will have to wait until next year :D
DeleteLooking at everything poetically :)
ReplyDeletegood one.
thanks Satish :)
Deletenice poem :)captures the travails of housekeeping..
ReplyDeleteWe forget any worries while cleaning! so true! Good one TTT!
ReplyDelete...making a hill out of a mole
ReplyDeleteand a wonderful poem out of a chore!
Drudgery made refreshing, Tangy, I loved it!
:) reminds me I need to do a lot of cleaning this weekend ...
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Very nice.
ReplyDeleteVery nice TTT. Enjoyed the read!
ReplyDeleteAlright TTT! Good one. Clean fresh start!
ReplyDeleteI am sure, your poem would come to my mind while I would be cleaning! How innovative TTT :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the blog title and was wondering what it was about, now I know :)
ReplyDeleteWhew, how much of this can I relate to??? Almost ALL!! ;) Love the house fairy!
ReplyDeleteWould love to hear from you! Do stop by my blog! *cheers*