Phew... that was powerful!
A whole gamut of emotions compressed in three lines
wonderful .....
...mind blowing! Wonderful!!
intense haiku that was . . Liked the note in the end . You are not alone in that regard ! :)
That is life.
Ha ha ! That's a good one ! You never know till you try it right ?
Hahaha...You should have told the same reason that Lord Krishna came in your dream and told to stop .....because he couldn't tolerate it anymore :) Good one....
loved the pick as much as the intensity in haiku...keep sharing
Oh! Intense lines and then u explain that u meant to toss the flute on to the funeral pyre :)
Phew... that was powerful!
ReplyDeleteA whole gamut of emotions compressed in three lines
ReplyDeletewonderful .....
ReplyDelete...mind blowing! Wonderful!!
ReplyDeleteintense haiku that was . . Liked the note in the end . You are not alone in that regard ! :)
ReplyDeleteThat is life.
ReplyDeleteHa ha ! That's a good one ! You never know till you try it right ?
ReplyDeleteHahaha...You should have told the same reason that Lord Krishna came in your dream and told to stop .....because he couldn't tolerate it anymore :) Good one....
ReplyDeleteloved the pick as much as the intensity in haiku...keep sharing
ReplyDeleteOh! Intense lines and then u explain that u meant to toss the flute on to the funeral pyre :)
ReplyDelete