Monday 29 July 2013

No it won't rain today !


I stand watching 
As the clouds above me 
take various forms and shapes 
The chariot turns into a monster 
The mermaids tail into an evil dragon 
The heart floats by 
teasing me , tempting me 
beyond my reach 
And then I see 
The storm cloud 
slowly inching towards me 
mocking me , provoking me 
with the rumbling sound 
inching closer and closer 
I feel the sharp pain
As the harsh wind blows 
across my face
I look up 
and wipe the single tear away 
No it won't rain today ! 

Take Care,
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18 comments:

  1. Dee29 July 2013 at 22:36

    beautifully carried away...
    reminds me of Ghanan Ghanan song :)

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    1. TTT30 July 2013 at 01:41

      Thank you Dee for the lovely comment !

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  2. ilakshee30 July 2013 at 01:54

    The kind of words I needed to read right now...thanks ...:)

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  3. Prasad Np30 July 2013 at 02:01

    Real good one..with a climax to inspire..

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  4. Rudra - The King30 July 2013 at 05:59

    very beautiful lines.. nice one!

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  5. Suresh Chandrasekaran30 July 2013 at 06:48

    Well had it rained maybe these beautiful words may not have rained on us.

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    1. TTT31 July 2013 at 09:00

      or may be i would have written about the rains then ;)

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  6. Rajesh30 July 2013 at 07:34

    Beautiful.

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  7. Ranita Sinha30 July 2013 at 11:58

    Beautiful lines..loved it..

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  8. Ranjana's craft blog30 July 2013 at 21:52

    "The chariot turns into a monster
    The mermaids tail into an evil dragon" ----Loved these lines. These lines tell the truth of life... loved it

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  9. a Rat31 July 2013 at 03:30

    beautiful lines..

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  10. jaish_vats2 August 2013 at 08:16

    Simple poetry can be extremely beautiful. Your lines hold testimony to that and I am glad that it did not rain. If it had, probably these words would have been unsaid!

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  11. magiceye10 August 2013 at 18:07

    Evokes melancholy... beautiful

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  12. sathish kumar15 August 2013 at 06:28

    allegoric TTT. I am reading between the lines.

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  13. Indrani3 September 2013 at 07:21

    Written really well. :0
    I see a monster up there.

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